Friday, May 24, 2013

Essay 4: Final Draft

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 Cuihua Lin
Mr. Hayes
English100 [1:10-2:00]
 5/6/13
Word Count:  1258
                                                               To be Outliers
            How does one become a successful person? Different people have different perspective. Some people may believe that success is the result of careful planning, but others may believe that success comes from taking risks and opportunities. However, I believe that success is a combination of external factors and personality.
 My book club’s text is Outliers: the Story of Success, it tells about what make a person successful. The author, Malcolm Gladwell, is a journalist for The Washington and writes from a contrarian viewpoint Post, points out his main points simply and briefly. Gladwell describes why people are so successful and shares interesting stories about successful people. He shows many examples to help us to think about some similarities between successful people in order to find out the key to success. What makes you succeed? Gladwell argues that there are some circumstantial and environmental factors that influence a person’s success.  He said that External factors play an important role in success.  Moreover, Gladwell use many examples demonstrates his main point, which is that the factors contributing to a person’s success are beyond the individual’s control, for he/she is influenced by circumstantial and environmental factors. From Gladwell’s explanations of success, his book contains the two most important parts: that hard work helps success people to succeed and that they should seize the opportunities when they occur.
            One of the most important parts is that successful people have the virtue of hard work. Malcolm Gladwell holds that “10,000 hours of working on skills seems to be a rule of success.”( Gladwell 39) I fully agree with him because only if we work hard, we can reach our dreams. For instance, Bill Gates could succeed not only because his computer savvy is better than others, but also because he worked much harder than others. Bill Gates started working towards the threshold of 10,000 hours when he gained access to a high school computer. When Gates was in his high school years, he skipped athletics and spent his whole nights at the Information Sciences Inc. and the Computer Center Corporation in order to use their computers to program. Without that hard effort, I believe that Gates could not have had his Microsoft companies around the world today. What’s more, before they had their first burst of success, the Beatles, a rock and roll band from England, had performed live in Hamburg, Germany over 1200 times from 1960 to 1964, which amassed more than 10,000 hours of playing time. All of the time the Beatles spent in performing shaped their talents, for “they were no good onstage when they went there and they were very good when they came back” (Gladwell 50). Everyone wants to succeed, but there is no shortcut to success. We will succeed only if we work hard. Gladwell’s conclusion about 10,000 hours teaches readers that only through extremely hard work and dedication they can make their dreams come true.
            In addition to talk about hard work, seizing the opportunity is very important because it can lead readers to learn more success. What’s the key to success? Malcolm Gladwell states that “successful people are often lucky to be in the right place at the right time.”(Gladwell 123) This quote shows that if those people did not seize the opportunities, they would never have chances to reach their goals. For instance, Bill Gates, the computer programming pioneer, dropped out of Harvard University in order to seize the opportunity to create a computer company called Microsoft with his friends. Even though Harvard is one of the most well-known universities around the world, and it could have helped Bill Gates to live a good life, Bill Gates gave up his school with great pluck to seize the opportunity to explore the way of his success. This opportunity allowed Bill Gates to get to the top of pyramid because that opportunity leads Bill Gates to get more opportunities. Obviously, seizing the opportunity is crucial for being successful. If Bill had stayed at the Harvard University until graduation, I believe Bill Gates would have lost the opportunity to reach his outstanding status today. Seizing your opportunity makes you go farther than others. It may be hard to seize it, but we should try our best to catch it and use it to change ourselves and even change the world. Gladwell’s point tells readers that once they seize the opportunity, they can succeed more than others with their hard effort.
While reading his book outliers, I feel this book is more easy than difficult when I read because it has fewer difficulty vocabularies. Even though there is few parts needs a little bit extra time to understand the concepts, most chapters are easy to understand because it contains some useful factors. For example, the chart is one of the factors. When Glawell writes about why do most successful people were born from Jan. to Apr., he not only uses some relevance datas to prove his claim, but also sets up some tables to help readers easily to understand what he talks about success. He inserts the charts under the end of his claims to persuade to readers to believe his claims. Having those charts, I can easily to read and remember this book. In addition, I think that charts are useful because I can through the charts to specific know what the author said. The other factor that I think his book is easy is because he has similarities points to explain the different success people. From chapter 2, Gladwell mentions two success people, Bill Gates and Bill Joy, who have some experience of success. Both of them succeed in the IT field, so I can easily compare their experience. Even though they have different skills about computers, they all follow same steps which reach the 10,000 hour rules, and seize the opportunities. Therefore, as a reader, I could understand the author’s main points.
Above all, Gladwell uses some effective evidences to show that his important parts of success is meaningful, and the text itself is easy to read, which is good for a transfer level college reading and writing class. I recommend this book to the future English 100 students because these two reasons: that it can help readers to learn how to be more successful and that it contains some useful and interesting knowledge for readers. From two reasons the future English 100 students not only can learn how to work hard or how to seize opportunities to reach their goals, but also they can easy to understand what this book talks about. With those meaningful reasons, there is wonder that this book is worth reading carefully for the future English 100 students.
      There is no doubt that successful people take advantage of opportunities. However, if we have good condition and environment, but we do not work hard, we can only watch opportunities pass. Bill Gates and Bill Joy seized the opportunities, but if they did not work hard, they wouldn’t succeed and become outliers. It is not always innate genius or talent that will make you a success; it’s the hours that you put in, which means that if we work hard now, we could expect success later on. If we don’t, our future life will probably be gloomy.


           
             


Work Cite
Malcolm Gladwell, Outliers: The Story of Success is a non-fiction book, published by little, brown
                   And company on November 18, 2008 New York: Hatchette book group (original work
   published 2008).

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